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leobar021
01-29-2004, 08:17 AM
Ok ,here it is http://www.dujamcommerce.netfirms.com/index.htm

Anything you say I will accept ( bad & good )
This is my first web site ,so please tell me your opinion

justjay
01-30-2004, 08:03 AM
It looks cluttered and unorganised. The background is distracting, there is no sense of layout, and the alias'ing of the logo is distracting as well.

Being that I am unable to understand the intent of your site I can only comment on visual presentation.

I would recommend doing some reading on using TABLES for LAYOUT (2 search terms that you could use here) and put that into practice and see what a dramatic difference it can make.

Have fun...good luck

leobar021
01-30-2004, 09:02 AM
thanks for advice ,I will try to redo my site and then please review it again ( using tables )